PJ, did you take these photos? If so, great job! If not, still a good job of making the story visible to us. Either way, captions are really needed here. What are we looking at?
Also, give us a little narrative about your impressions of Occupy Denver and Cville. You visited both sites, so your first-hand experience is very relevant.
Overall, you, the reporter, need to be more present in your blog by narrating the process of researching an reporting on this complex ongoing story.
If you do that, then I think this will be a very strong blog that other people would benefit from reading.
PJ, did you take these photos? If so, great job! If not, still a good job of making the story visible to us. Either way, captions are really needed here. What are we looking at?
ReplyDeleteAlso, give us a little narrative about your impressions of Occupy Denver and Cville. You visited both sites, so your first-hand experience is very relevant.
Overall, you, the reporter, need to be more present in your blog by narrating the process of researching an reporting on this complex ongoing story.
If you do that, then I think this will be a very strong blog that other people would benefit from reading.